Reminisce and contemplate 2

Namine · Monitor Joined: 22 Nov 2006 Posts: 197

Reminisce and
Contemplate II
Fate and Destiny

“The past is the future, the future is the past, they both come full circle and are made to last” ~ Edgar Allen Poe

Chapter one
Intertwined Future

On an island called Verbose right near the statue of the great key blade bearer was a marvelous house. Quite of the ordinary, as dawns light shown threw the windows upon his face, in his room right down the hall on the second floor , he lay there dreaming in his slumber.

~ what had happened about a year ago was not just imagination…he had multiple scars on his body, Even though he couldn’t see him, he knew he was there watching as it all went threw…Who are you…Asked the key blade bearer… My name is..~

RING RING RING! went Gaiva’s alarm clock. He woke slowly, trying to remember each dream but it always seemed to fade away. He sat up thinking helplessly about the remainder of each dream. Gaiva stood to his feet and walked stumpy down the stairs staggering along each step “ I wish I knew the answers..” Gaiva mumbled to himself.

He walked outside sighing, he was still tired for at night he could not receive much sleep. The wind blew quite hard that day and a voice called with it…, it called….“ The Calling of My Voice…brings your fate” . Then it was as if that voice brought pain like a thousand blades clashing into him, Gaiva Screamed while his arms crisscrossed clenching each shoulder. Falling to his knees and every time he looked to find the reason why his sight was blurred and everything seemed to shake! He suddenly fell unconscious.

Awakening somewhere dark, damp and mysterious…"where am I? "
Gaiva thought to himself…looking in every direction after every noise he heard. He saw a mere sparkle a little further ahead. He just stared hearing a familiar voice call…“Don’t be afraid of it…follow what your eyes tell you” Gaiva listened to the voice and walked to the mirror hearing noises of faint crying. When he reached the mirror it was of a unnatural appearance…he leaned forwards glancing into the reflecting object…instead of seeing himself and the darkness, he only saw A white room filled with Pictures like paintings and in the middle was a girl from what he could see she had long black hair…but she was turned facing a window.

Then Seeing her glance suddenly changed now slightly focused on Gaiva from the side…her eyes were green. She seemed scared once she saw him . Another voice called this time in a mans hesitation, the voice was everywhere and it seemed to go on he was unhappy or possibly angry… “ What do you think you are doing? You aren’t supposed to be here right now! It is too soon ..…do you know your true name?” All went blur and seemed to change into a memory as screens of darkness. “they must be memory’s from someone else“… “ As the key bearer you must already know! One must not meddle in the affairs of other worlds! …The Memory went on only to show Gaiva the past and end of his Fathers Journey…and the beginning of his. But there was a slight part not shown to Gaiva for he was to discover the important part on his own. Or if he could. Looking down in wonder if this “Sora” was his father…

“But where did he go…if his journey really ended…does that mean he’s dead“ …Gaiva thought hard to himself…Do I know my true name…? What did it mean by that? Gaiva said aloud…Then the girls voice called once more… “ if you want the answers my mirrors open..” walking back over to the Mirror staring … “what was it you wanted me to do?” he asked with a feeling of encouragement.

Axel · Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 1:46 pm Post subject:

Great story so far.

Namine · Monitor Joined: 22 Nov 2006 Posts: 197

Yeah haven't worked on it in soo long. Kinda can't think of anything.. and i'm going to have a slight problem on the action scenes. i'm not very good and detailed the battles.

Axel · Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 1:50 pm Post subject:

Neither am I.

Roxas · Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 2:26 pm Post subject:

count me in..

Axel · Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 4:34 pm Post subject:

Haha yeah. Hope you post more soon!

Hexin · Moderator Joined: 28 Dec 2006 Posts: 155

Nice. It's really interesting. Maybe I should take a small break from typing my pages and relax.

The point is, your story is pretty cool. If you need help with fight scenes, I'm your man for the job.

Oh and I don't mean to be rude, but did you ask Gaiva permission to use his character in the story? Just saying.

And if you're using other peoples characters in the story....then....can you use mines? PLEASE? Icon__9_Demyx_Avatar_by_BeagleTsuin

Gaiva · Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:34 am Post subject:

Me and Nam were working on the story together but i dropped out due to another.

Axel · Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 9:45 pm Post subject: